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Sunday, September 19, 2010
/5:21 PM

Here's a little warm-up:

Ardour
If pond fish knew not fish from seas;
If meadows knew not forest trees;
If gravel knew not desert caves;
If apples knew not cider graves.
And yet I know you. And that's rather
Suave.

*

And then one for Gengjie's birthday! Madly late, and I apologize for that ):

A little beyond now
Your scented breath of mellow mint upon the aftershave,
an Apple effort on the trek to starlet that you pave.
With winter walks through slighted snow and jogs through fetter-fog,
yet summer solace waits beyond the battles that you brave.

*

And then a proper one, I guess:

Three-tone tumult
Red tea; the calligraphic words upon the weathered wall,
Red salmon; prize of spring-time fresh from winter's treasured trawl.
Red steak; the meat is reasoned raw - the red has yet to fade,
Red melon; mess or guess or blest: the choice remains unmade.

Green signs; so spelling exit from the red-adorned cafe,
Green cacti; 'long the alleyway that warn me not to stay.
Green cab; a genial greeting like a genie from her lamp:
Green meadow, please.

Amber; amble along - as if I'm not to leave.

Red rear-lamps; nay the rapid red, they stop me in my track,
Green bill - what's going through my head? - my feet take me right back;
to the glimpse of gold I see in you -
for you're the star I cannot lack.

*

Mmmmmmm! Poetic devices:

1st: Anaphora, perfect rhyme, iambic tetrameter.

2nd: Perfect rhyme, mind rhyme, assonance, consonance, alliteration, sibilance, symbol, allusion, iambic heptameter.

Last: Anaphora, perfect rhyme, mind rhyme, internal rhyme, assonance, consonance, alliteration, pun, symbol, caesura, colour imagery, iambic heptameter (:

Awesome. Until next time!

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Eugene Leong
23 Nov 1993
ACSi 4.9 09
Westside Anglican Church
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